I love it. I only noted a few punctuation errors, but they did not detract from the effective point of the letter. It would be very cool to turn on a few lights in the minds of Henderson officials. We already know the county won't listen to reason, but when they are the only ones left, I think it will a lot easier for the State to step in.
Anyone know what happens in Mesquite? They have their own police, so I am assuming they are an incorporated city with their own laws.