As someone who has to deal with FAR too many emails at work every day, I think you lose the effect after the first line or so. I'm guessing that (if anything) all she sees is a tally of for/against. I kept mine short and sweet:
Thanks for the heads-up on this one. I check the news every day on AZCDL, so I would have seen it there, as well.
Topic:Support for SB1301
Subject says it all. I think that SB1301 goes a long way toward
clarifying citizens' rights in Arizona; both for citizens and for law
enforcement. I hope that you will sign this bill. Thank you.