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    Good article, good points. Short and effective.

    Just a few things:

    - the first sentence says "Brandy"

    - "You see … the way it works is this." - I would have ended it with a ":" and made the "The" of the next sentence lowercase.

    - I would have made the final sentence a seperate paragraph for punch.

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    I fixed the mis-spelling. It apparently takes a few minutes for newly updated content to refresh.

    As for looking better than that picture, I will take that as a compliment and try to get a better picture taken but I am not sure that it will look any better.



    BB62 wrote:
    Good article, good points. Short and effective.

    Just a few things:

    - the first sentence says "Brandy"

    - "You see … the way it works is this." - I would have ended it with a ":" and made the "The" of the next sentence lowercase.

    - I would have made the final sentence a seperate paragraph for punch.

    Get a new picture - you're better looking that it shows!

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    live in a dictatorship or under the rule of an authoritarian regime.
    One or the other?

    start by lifting up those in need and not by pushing down on law-abiding gun owners!
    "lifting up those in need" is great.


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