Looks ok. The only thing I saw that I'd change it the caption under the WBRZ report about Carrying a gun is legal in LA as long as it's in a holster. There's nothing I can find anywhere that says that it must be in a holster. You can tuck it in your belt, put it in a pocketor even carry it in your hand. Most of us herecarry in a holster because it's easierto do so. That said, I have a pair of jeans with a overly large "watch pocket" where I sometimes carry my Bersa Thunder .380.The pocket is large enough to carry the gun with out dropping it but the entire grip and part of the slide is exposed so it's still OC.