So far the Possession of a firearm with alcohol in your system on the video is wrong. While CCing with a CPL the max BAC is .02 and while OCing it is .08.
You mention that carrying on UofM campus is a serious offense. What are the consequences for doing so?
GFZs are federal, PFZ are State. Having a PP permit excepts one from the federal GFZs (such as 1000 ft from a school). Having a CPL allows you to OC in State PFZs -- which you had correct.
Good Job on the video!