Why would you want the portion regarding "local ordinances" removed? If you do that, you have effectively changed NOTHING. Everything would remain exactly as it is now and political subdivisions within this state would still be able to prohibit OC in their jurisdiction, even for those with a CCW endorsement.
I think you were caught by some sloppy phrasing by dkangel21. Everything up to the last sentence is about gaining preemption for OC. The last sentence appears to ask for the opposite of that. I believe he's asking for the proposed bill to remove (preempt) local ordinances, not remove the local ordinances clause of the proposed bill.
I'm still not convinced that this proposed bill will provide preemption, but I guess we'll see...