A couple suggestions if I may.
Dont tell them that "You need to ammend", they wont like being told what to do.
Adding definitions to preemption is NOT the right way to go about this. It just opens the door for someone else to subvert the law like CADL, and the Waterford Schools/Police have.
What we need to ask the legislature to do, is to remove the definitions to preemption instead, wording it in such a way as to include everybody paid by the taxdollar.