This story is one of those that you read and a voice pops into your head as an overlay and reads the text for you... it was the voice of a less than intelligent person this time, oafish and possibly mild retarded. (afterwards, I took it to be meant that way and part of the genius of the story... lol)
The wall of text was hard on my eyes, the grammar was terrible, don't get me started on punctuation.. all of it was quite hard to interpret/follow.
Took me a bit, but low and behold, the story was entertaining and a great story. What are the chances of something like that happening?! (the terribly written text but turning out to be great, AND the story itself)
Thanks for sharing! boooooooooolits. lol