...the good old days of paragraphs and such?Just some advice; people will be more likely to read your post if you break it down into bite sized pieces.
Just some advice; people will be more likely to read your post if you break it down into bite sized pieces.
but nobody bothered to read it, does it really count?yeah, well what do you expect after I've worked all day and posted that last minute before I walked up to bed? Either way I got out what I wanted to say.
but nobody bothered to read it, does it really count?
Cause I know I didn't read it.
I'm not trying to be rude or an ass, I'm merely trying to help you. It is better for your point, and the people reading it, if you break it down into paragraphs. A wall of text like that is much harder to read and most people simply aren't going to bother.yeah, well what do you expect after I've worked all day and posted that last minute before I walked up to bed? Either way I got out what I wanted to say.
See how much easier it is to read?I thought that all things considered this was an amazingly positive piece.
For starting it off with a workplace shooting they truly moved away from that. The woman that made the piece called me earlier in the day to tell me that it was going to be on. She also wanted to assure me that it had already been scheduled to run and that they weren't just running it because of the workplace shooting.
I fail to see how the people were obviously anti? Perhaps your failing to see that today we are beginning to get some friends in the media. I know for a fact that the woman who did the piece on my organization wasn't anti at all. She was very passionate and curios, an excellent journalist! I was actually extremely surprised by how positive she was. She truly listened to the facts and began to form an opinion based upon fact, not emotion.
She also called me to get a quote about how the Brady Campaign had called me a "radical". They failed to state my response because I don't think it fit what they thought I would say? I replied with "It's just sad when they have to resort to name calling".
Remember fellas, we are just everyday people and the media as well as everyone else is beginning to see this. I can definitely see them saying: "Hey, those guys were really cool! I would definitely hangout with them in my daily life! They're really nice people too!" We are winning guys... everyday a little bit more... everyday.
Only thing I didn't like about the piece was the fact that they tried to make us look like we were against the NRA. Is the NRA the best? No, but they're the best we have and we are NOT going to leave them in the cold and in most aspects they won't leave us out there either. But you must realize that they need to be a safe-haven for all firearms owners. We are a much more nimble, faster paced group that can react at a moments notice to different circumstances occurring in our state.
We need to be around on the state level, just as much as the NRA needs to be around on the national level. Ok, I'm done my little rant... it's late at night and I need to get to bed so I'll be able to function at work!
I edited it just a minute ago... not into as many paragraphs as you though. Hey, I'm a college kid walls of text are my life! haha... either way, yes it's easier to read but I just didn't have time, nor is it even that well written. It was simply something that I plastered down on my way to bed before work again the next day. Next time I'll make sure that I have more time, and form a much more articulate piece.I'm not trying to be rude or an ass, I'm merely trying to help you. It is better for your point, and the people reading it, if you break it down into paragraphs. A wall of text like that is much harder to read and most people simply aren't going to bother.
See how much easier it is to read?
*FacePalm*I edited it just a minute ago... not into as many paragraphs as you though. [highlight]Hey, I'm a college kid walls of text are my life![/highlight] haha... either way, yes it's easier to read but I just didn't have time, nor is it even that well written. It was simply something that I plastered down on my way to bed before work again the next day. Next time I'll make sure that I have more time, and form a much more articulate piece.
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*facepalm*Hey, lets see you go through some of my pre-med classes without having a wall of text dealing with different drugs and their interactions with the human body...